Great title! I love how it grabs the readers attention. With your writing it makes me feel like I am having breakfast. Keep up the great writing!
I really like this, Ruby. Especially the last stanza. I love your title, like Alyssa said, it grabs the reader's attention. Your writing is amazing.Annalyse
Great title! I love how it grabs the readers attention. With your writing it makes me feel like I am having breakfast. Keep up the great writing!
ReplyDeleteI really like this, Ruby. Especially the last stanza. I love your title, like Alyssa said, it grabs the reader's attention. Your writing is amazing.
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